Here in Marshall Michigan at a rented home for a writers’ retreat with 12 other women from Mid-Michigan Romance Writers of America group. At this retreat I plan to write and read about writing and just relax. It is just after 1 p.m. the first day of the retreat and all ready I have my next book plotted out. Oh dear! What to do now! Think I’ll go get some lunch.
June 30, 2017 I submitted under 6,000 words of my short contemporary romance book with the working title, The Cattle Barron’s Redemption, to Pages From The Heart Contest. I don’t expect to win. All I want are the comments on the work I submitted. I’ll know something in late September…I think.
In the meantime, I continue to work on the story. I know there are problems with it such as not enough internal dialogue. Still I submitted the story to find other areas that need improvement.
I think too that the conflicts need work so they are more intense. Romance novels are notorious for pressing the issue of conflict. I think readers can grasp subtleties, but that is not what I’m seeing in my reading of published writers works. They keep hammering away in different language as to what the central problem is with their characters. Ugh!
I am speaking this into my phone so it may not be perfect and there shouldn’t be any punctuation I am on chapter 8 in the editing process I stopped mid chapter 8 just because I grew tired and needed a change of pace I hope that’s not a reflection on my work and the pacing I stopped at an interesting place and we’ll need to go back and reread chapter 7 in order to figure out what I’m doing going forward I’m curious to know how other writers edit their work what they do how they set themselves up to process the writing I work in my computer room which has a window and I use plastic hard plastic table as my desk I drink lots of Crystal Light iced tea in a reusable cup pet my kitties often and just go in till my butt goes numb that is my process what is yours?
I’m on chapter 6 in the editing process of my contemporary romance book. I’m enjoying rereading it very much and have forgotten a lot of the book, which makes it refreshing to read. Actually, I finished writing the 50,000 word book December 8, 2016 and never looked at it until now–now that I’m editing it. Six months later I’m editing. It feels really good to look back at my work and enjoy reading it. That’s a bright positive for me on my editing path. How different it would be if I hated reading my own work. (Pitch it out the window I say if I hate it). Well, not really literally pitch it out the window but that is the first thing that came to mind just now.
I woke at 5:08 a.m. I couldn’t go back to sleep so I got up, went into my computer room and started editing the book I wrote for NaNoWriMo 2016. NaNoWriMo is National Novel Writing Month. I attempted it for the first time last year. It is supposed to take participants four weeks to write a short novel of 50,000 words. It took me six weeks.
Even so, I’m quite proud of the book I produced and am enjoying the editing process. Hopefully I can get this book edited quickly so I can send it out to potential publishers. How exciting would that be to have a book published? Pretty exciting.
Saturday, June 17, 2017, I met Kevin Spall the CEO/President of Thomson-Shore books. I met him in a restaurant in Ann Arbor where I pitched him my latest contemporary romance book with the working title: The Cattle Baron’s Redemption.
This was the first time I have pitched a book to anyone. I wasn’t nervous. I was intrigued by the process. I wondered what he would ask me. How did I come to this place of writing romance novels? I think I blacked out when he asked me that. I know my lips were moving and something was coming out because I could hear the sound of my voice droning about something. I think I said something like, I read a romance novel a couple of years ago and thought I could write something like that, so I did. Ugh! Well! Of all the nerve. Not anything about my love of reading romances and my interest in their stories or my interest in crafting a good story–at least I think it is a good story. My mother (and two cats) seem to think so.
I was caught up in the moment. He wrote something on the top right corner of the two-page synopsis I brought along and gave him. I wonder what that something was. Now having gone through the process of pitching for the first time I look forward to getting to pitch more often to other book industry insiders.
I keep trying to tell myself that I might have bombed the pitch, but daily, even sometimes hourly, search my email for a message from Thomson-Shore. I sent a thank you note today with a logline for the longer novel. I hope, I wish, I’ll keep my fingers crossed and keep checking my email for a response from Kevin Spall.
Yesterday, I finished the second draft of my novel. I’ve started working on the third draft of my novel and have found several places where I can both tighten it up and expand character thoughts.
The novel’s working title is “Second Chance at Happiness”.
So now I’m editing my novel. I’m finding plenty of things to correct; such as forgetting commas or expanding sections, etc. My writing isn’t perfect, but I’m getting it as close to perfect as I can.
What are your experiences with self editing?
August 27, 2016–I just finished the first draft of my novel Second Chance at Love–my working title. The hard part is over…or is it? Now I get to go back through it page by page and tweak what I wrote. I’m dreading it, but am glad at least the first stage and hardest part–the getting started and keeping at it–is complete.
I’ve fallen off the writing cart, been frightened of what I might find when I climbed back on, but climbed back on I did. I’m happy to announce that I am writing again and feeling oh so good about what I’m producing. The novel that has sat dormant is now once again being worked on. As you can see, I’m not editing myself as a I write. I just want to get the story down and get it finished so I can turn back around and revise it to make it stronger.
It is amazing that once again my characters have come to life are speaking to me, to each other and the conversations flow. Other characters have popped in and are demanding attention, no matter, how brief.
I feel good about what I’m writing. It feels so good to write again.